Also, I am rubbish at grammar and quite frankly don't care either! I write as I think regardless of the sense it makes.
And I love exclamation marks.
blackness dropping on you with a roar
as if you have no
right to be here
to be alive
suffocating blackness
cloying foulness
enveloping all things
darkness bellowing
out
ripping at your senses
all you can taste,
see feel, smell and hear is dust
leaving you alone, blinding you
choking you
blistering your skin,
all you can hear is
the dust,
all you can smell is
the dust filling your nose
all alone, but
surrounded by others
somewhere, maybe,
a touch, a hand,
takes yours, takes you away
darkness lightens
the thundering whimpers away
for now
for now
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